SNAIL track,
Sky is black,
Scampering fox -
On rubbish stack.
Rat (brown),
In river (drown),
Flying bat
(Gets chased by cat).
Moonshine,
Silver pine,
Aeroplane,
Road white line.
Stars (small),
Golden lawn,
Snow-lined-roof,
Field of corn.
Chimneys (tall),
From pub shouts (goal!),
Windy night,
(Thunder roll).
Rain (in town),
Falls around,
Tree sways,
As I look down.
Submitted by Xantiana Young, aged 12, Helmsley.
Updated: 11:29 Wednesday, February 05, 2003
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